Picross NP Vol. 1 - Anyone willing to proofread my translation?

[aceredshirt13]

Hello there! I recently translated what I believe to be all text in Picross NP Vol. 1, but since I'm not entirely fluent in Japanese, I'm a little uncertain about some of it - mostly the brief segment involving Buddhist temples, which I know little about the history of and which used more difficult language than the rest of the game. So if someone could give my translation a glance and let me know if I've made any glaring errors, it would be greatly appreciated.